Although many people did go home last weekend our group still did get the chance to collect some of our photographic evidence. Our evidence is compiled from two different dorms, but the mess and grime are still the same from whichever bathroom. We feel that we collected pretty good evidence of the points that we are trying to get across. The photos do a nice job of illustrating the points we have been addressing. It was good to have a meeting today with Dr. Morris so we could see what else we needed to add or what else was missing from our proposal. Our biggest issue was not really having a body for our proposal.
Although we did take out a part of our proposal that we thought was not as relevant or as important as the other issues were dealing with. We took out our issue of the quiet hours. Our group felt that, for one, the two issues do not really relate or go together. Also we figured that the bathrooms are a way bigger issue compared to the quiet hours. Quiet hours have been an issue for so long that it seems like it will never be solved, it is college and people are never going stop being loud. We figured that this issue has already tried to be solved either by the building directors, public safety, or CA's and those attempts have not been successful. We feel that the bathrooms are something that we could make at least a difference in.
Hopefully we can make our body of our proposal better by adding our evidence and what we have done so far, as in the conversations that we've had with some of the staff. Both of these suggestions by Dr. Morris really helped us figure out exactly what we needed in order to make sure we have all the pieces to our proposal and to make sure that we still have a chance to make a change on this issue. Our hope is to get the proposal done over the weekend or early in the following week.
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